The Internet Shiki Haiku
Salon
The Shiki Team Research Trip to the U.S. in
September, 1998
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Purpose: interview several haiku poets and leading Shiki-list members to investigate
haiku development and Internet influence on haiku in the US. |
Travel Journal
September 4: Departure from Narita
| First visit to U.S. !! I was a little nervous. We took the DELTA Airline flight, because it was the cheapest. No wonder their service was just plain and the flight attendants never once smiled. I missed the JAL's attendants smile, even if it was a forced commercial one. |
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September 4 Arrival at Los Angeles Airport
The inside of the airport building was a little dark because it was so crowded with so many people from various countries. The airport is situated in an open field surrounded by some new buildings under construction. There were many construction cranes. It looked like a new space station in a desert. The sky was unexpectedly cloudy. The taxi was old and shabby, but it ran very fast with with a roaring sound. Our first step on the U.S. was at the mixed cultural town Little Tokyo,where my college senior Mr. Kitaoka made arrangements at Hotel New Ohtani. We had expected a bright blue Californian sky, but Los Angeles was humid and covered with clouds due to El Nino. Instead we could see more beautiful reddish pink Indian lilac blossoms here and there.
September 5 At the Los Angeles Japanese Consul General's official residence
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| In Los Angeles, Hiroko and I visited the Universal Studio where we had a very exciting tour of famous American movie sets. In the late afternoon we had a short sightseeing walk on our own around the town of Little Tokyo. All the streets and the tall buildings looked gray, dull and lifeless partly because it was under the cloudy sky and partly because the town was designed for a car-oriented society. I couldnt help sensing a kind of tense feeling caused by heterogeneous cultures other than warm hearted local culture. Mr. Kitaoka invited us to dinner at a beautiful club in a skyscraper. He is a member of the club. We enjoyed the tasty California wine and dishes and beautiful night view from the tall window. After dinner we dropped in at his place which is also on the high floor of the tall building. He said he had another two more appointments that night, so he was going to have another drink with those people later. He had to overwork to cope with the business society in this competitive city. The city never seemed to be sleep. The night view may have been a symbol of a struggling society. |
haiku:
red Indian lilacs
in a blazeat twilight of a melting pot
of ethnic cultures
September 7 at Schenectady
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it because of El Nino? The weather was similar to our rainy season. We had a real American style breakfast at the hotel, then Yu came to pick us up to go to Union College. We drove through old towns developed and later deserted by General Motors. Union College is the oldest historical college in the state of New York. We walked in the campus in the fine rain falling now and then. There bloomed pale pink roses of Sharon here and there. They had a beautiful memorial dome. Inside of the dome it was full of oriental color and the ceiling was made after a beautiful cobalt universe with colorful bright stars in it. Some squirrels were hopping about and they climbed up and hid behind the branch of the tree in the campus. |
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haiku: at the dome of the Union College
the lapis lazuli ceiling the summer trip |
misty rain. It is huge. We saw the history of the American Indian and early American. The exhibits and models, everything was huge. One section may be equivalent to the whole building of our Prefectural Museum, which cost 16 billion yen. |
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| The building was opposite the State Government Office. There was a huge shallow pool and a huge Egg between the two buildings. We walked beside the pool to a big modern building. It was a theater called the Egg. Under the pool and the Egg was a very large parking lot. We almost lost our way, because it is so bug. Even Larry could not find the exit. |
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The misty drizzle was going
to stop in the late afternoon. We were taken to Hilary's place in
the suburbs. Hilary is a music professor at Union College and she
was once in Japan to practice shakuhachi, a bamboo flute, so she
is quite interested in traditional Japanese culture. She is now
influenced by Yu and very interested in haiku. They often enjoy
taking a walk along the river and composing haiku. Her haiku posted
to the Internet Shiki-list biweekly kukai often receives good points,
and also she was the second prize winner of the 2nd Shiki Contest.
She welcomed us with a big smile and her graceful collie dog, Anna.
Her house is a country style log house in the large stretch of greensward.
Neat and tidy. She said she could see squirrels and even deer in
the garden. There are several big holes made by woodpeckers in the
logs outside. The atmosphere was just like a scene of the book ,
" The little House in the Prairie. Of course her house is
bigger than Laura's. Just above her bed there is a small skylight.
She can sleep under the starlight.
A poet who lives in New York, Clark , who composes 5-7-5 syllable haiku and trains his students in a way of Zen Buddhism, joined us. We enjoyed wine and haiku talks. Yu had first posted a haiku to me and asked me to give him comment on his haiku, then he began to learn a lot about haiku through the Internet Shiki list. He was the winner of the 2nd Shiki Haiku Contest and now he is one of the leading Shiki members. I was asked some questions about traditional haiku regulations. I wished I could have practiced haiku more before. Since Yu is now leading biweekly kukai in the Shiki list with the cooperation of Hiromi, Yu and Hiromi were already good net friends and Yu was pleased to meet Hiromi and they looked like real brothers. Yu, Hilary and Clark are all sincere haiku lovers and they are eager to learn real traditional haiku spirit. |
September 8
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September 8 noon : Arrive at Boston
Airport
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| The bunk bed was so hard and small that I could sleep well and I was just dozing, so I was very sleepy this morning , but I forced myself to wake up . We went to the Boston Museum. It took us around 30 minutes to walk there from the hostel. The tree-lined streets to the museum were good. The buildings along the streets were all in the neo- classical British style. As we were in a fresh morning air, it was a pleasant walk. |
| Far from Japan in Boston we
saw ancient Japanese paintings and ukiyoe. We also looked at many
famous western paintings which had been influenced by the old Japanese
artists. We bought museum goods at the museum shop. We had lunch
at the museum restaurant and again I faced the key word, "huge".
The sandwich was huge. It was a good idea for Hiroko and I to share
a sandwich. Sumi looked really exhausted. He had not been sleeping well so far. Hiromi sneezed loudly and it made Sumi wake up. Only Sumi decided to go back to the hostel to sleep again. He has a beard and moustache and is heavy built, so he looks a strong and happy-go-lucky person, but apparently he is sensitive and delicate. While Hiroko and I were out in the town, he slept alone in our bedroom.
We invited Mr. Paul Mena to dinner at a good bar restaurant. He is a successful computer engineer and one of the leading Shiki-list members. He is an Spanish American and very handsome. He recommended the restaurant. It was a very nice modern American club with jazz. The customers were likely to be sophisticated business people. It was also another aspect of modern fashionable American society. The food was very good and the beer had a fragrant smell. We talked about the Shiki-list and haiku and many cultural things. I really had a good time, good food, beer and talks in a good place. |
at Boston
scents of beer melts
into the sound of jazz
September 10 From Boston to Washington
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We finally managed to land at Washington-Reagan National Airport.We had crossed over the North American Continent!! Mrs. Kristen Deming, president of HSA waited for us at the arrival lobby. I had met her in Japan before when she visited Matsuyama as a leader of HSA group tour. She was wearing a rose pink hat and a dark blue suit. She is a pretty and intelligent lady, wife of a diplomat. Mr. Deming was deputy ambassador to Japan. Once we see her and talk with her, we will be able to know how intelligent and capable she is by her prompt and graceful way of talking and walking. She must be a great president of HSA with her leadership. |
She drove us to the hotel and warned us that we must not go out at night because the hotel was next to a dangerous zone. She also said that she was going to invite us to dinner at a famous prestigious country club that evening.
The hotel was incredibly cheap, but not so bad as we expected. We learned about the real American way of living there. We had two more hours for check-in. The toilet rooms on the lobby, the elevators and the hotel front desk, everything for many people were locked and we needed our own card key to enter them. Safety and water is just like air provided for us in Japan, but here in the States, we have to protect ourselves. I could hear shot sounds outside the hotel at midnight for the two nights.
The fifth key word: self-defense
When we were killing time until the check-in time, Andrea turned up all the way from Pittsburgh. Andrea was the first Shiki Internet Haiku Contest winner. The prize was tickets to Matsuyama. The Shiki team invited her in July 1996 on the star festival day and had an interesting event with the help of some volunteer groups. We served several kinds of special Matsuyama dishes which Masaoka Shiki used to eat as his favorite foods, which were mentioned in his essay, "Gyoga Manroku". Andrea stayed with our friend, Mrs. Mukai in Matsuyama. She enjoyed Matsuyama and Japan fully. This time in return for our invitation, she offered her time to us as a volunteer guide in Washington. She is now taking Ph.D. course at the University of Pittsburgh. She has become an even more charming and attractive woman than before. She must have something good in her recent life. She began to organize a student haiku group in the college.
After we had checked in to the hotel room, we were guided to the periphery of the White House by Andrea. Again, spacious. Even the grand White House looked small in the spacious green park. The early autumn sky was clear, crisp and very blue. The flags of the Stars and Stripes were fluttering against the blue sky. Grand buildings stands along the streets, and some tourists with different ethnic backgrounds were walking slowly, some business people were walking fast and some homeless men were strolling and shouting. Spacious and diverse. We walked to the Washington Tower Monument and walked back to the hotel. Even if we walked only a few blocks, we felt as if we had walked through the whole town. Worn out.
The sixth and seventh word: spacious and diverse
haiku:
early autumn
The Stars and Stripes is fluttering on
the top of the White House
One of the most exciting nights during our summer trip. We were invited to the gorgeous country club, the Chaby Chase Country Club by Mrs. Deming. It is a high society membership club. The entrance was like the hall of a palace. Chandeliers on the ceiling and magnificent paintings on the wall, soft arm chairs and elegant floor lamps, flowers in the vase----and lovely music!! We could see elegant couples dressed up with ties and long skirts , hand in hand.--. Hiromi was brave enough to wear sports shoes and a T-shirt. He had only casual clothes during the trip. The place was too formal and superior for us. Unfortunately, or luckily for us, the main restaurant, where a party was being held with a performance of an ensemble, was all reserved for the party group, so we had to go to an attached restaurant which was a little casual for the people who enjoyed tennis or other sports in the court. The food was good, but we were already too worn out and nervous to eat. Our stomachs seemed just to request a rest.
The spacious lawn garden was in the twilight of the setting sun. There were various kinds of autumn grasses and flowers, some of which are familiar in Japan, bigger sized, though. After dark the sound of insects chirping grew reverberating to the spacious surroundings. American crickets may be much bigger. Most American people are not interested in the autumn insect chirping, but Kristen used to enjoy the sound in Japan, so she seemed to be sensitive to everything related to the transience of the seasons e and inspired to compose haiku. The moment reminded her of Japanese culture, for which she felt nostalgic
I talked with her about haiku. She has learned so much about Japanese culture. She may know Japanese traditional literature and history better than ordinary Japanese people. I had to make a great effort to catch up with her level both in English and cultural knowledge. It was regrettable that there was a little language barrier between us, but on the whole I had a tremendously happy and enjoyable time. I was just on cloud nine.
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September 11
In the morning we took a walk and had a nice buffet style breakfast at a
restaurant near the hotel. The price was reasonably low and the food was just what we wanted. After breakfast we went to Kristen's father in-law's home. It was a typical Georgian style house. He used to be a consul in Okinawa and he was very interested in collecting Japanese antiques. All the rooms were neat and well decorated by these collections. It was like a small exhibition hall. The second floor was a special guest room with a balcony which was designed after a Japanese garden. We could hear cicadas singing.
Ellen Compton had waited for us. She is a writer and a keen haiku poet. She was also a member of HSA delegate of the Japan -U.S. haiku conference at Tokyo and at the reception party I sat next to her and we talked with each other. She came to Matsuyama ,too.Å@We were both excited and pleased to meet again.
Kristin and Ellen were our volunteer guides that morning. We went to the Lincoln Memorial. It is built of grand marble stones. The statue of Lincoln was again splendid and magnificent . I was very impressed to see his big smile and fingers which shows a sign language. In memory of our encounter and reunion we took a picture of the Shiki team and American haiku poets in front of the statue of Lincoln. Far opposite in the distance stands the majestic Washington Memorial Tower. The two great men were really giants.
Between the two giants' monuments lies the reflecting pool into which Forrest Gump jumped. A Refreshing late summer breeze was gently rubbing the surface of the pool and made peaceful ripples. On the side of the pool some geese were standing in a line and others were swimming over the fine ripples leisurely. They were enjoying a short time of peace. Looking at some little squirrels sometimes hopping and running on the green bank beside the promenade, we took a walk along the pool under the shade of the trees, talking about haiku concept and how to appreciate Japanese traditional art and its aesthetic space. The walk was a kind of ginko, a haiku walk.
The eight key word: giants
haiku:
going a round between
the memorials of the two giants
summer breeze
Kristen sent me her haiku that she had composed at that time.
Lincoln Memorial:
autumn clarity
cutting deep into marble
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informative and inspiring at lunch. Both Kristen and Ellen are great.
They are very active busy women, but they were very kind to take time
to meet us. Thanks to them our trip became very fruitful. Andrea was our afternoon guide. Although we were very tired, we could not miss American culture. We went to the Space Science Museum. We saw models of space shuttles and some other space ships. Andrea gave me a souvenir of space ice cream. The museum is full of information on space and we can share the astronauts experience through some exhibits and models, but my curiosity gave in to my feet's pain. I really understood why American people worked hard to invent roller skates shoes and cars. |
| Andrea had found a very good Brazilian restaurant.
It was terrific!! The American Brazilian food was very delicious, and
beers were also very fragrant and tasty. Finally we were fully satisfied
with the American(?) cooking at the end of our trip. Perhaps first we
had been nervous and now we felt relieved to complete our schedule and
relax. So our stomachs began to work again. We asked Andrea to answer
the questionnaire about her haiku experience. That was our last job. She gave us a ride to our hotel. We were very surprised to see her very big car-key which resembled the Japanese short metal truncheon in the Edo period. We had to realize again that self-defense is important. We had to say good by to Andrea,now. She was really cute and kind. |
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P.S. Professor Yu Chang was kind enough
to send me a Christmas Present, beautiful red
roses from the STATES. I was overjoyed. The picture below is kim in Matsuyama
with Yu's roses.